Hunger On the Inside

Hunger On the Inside

A Poem by AMetaphoricalSoul

Is it possible
For Hunger to eat?
Because it seems to be feeding on me
From the inside out
Slowly
Painfully
Sounds around me become muted
Because I'm trying to focus on not feeling the Hunger
It's breaking through my stomach
Chewing it away
People stare at me
They hear the growling
Of the beast
Hunger
Hunger the beast
A great monster
I could just imagine it
Its gleaming and viciously sharp teeth
Ripping me apart
I want to turn away and empty myself
Rid myself of the beast
But I won't
I believe that will only make it stronger
 
This is all insignificant
Because tomorrow
I won't even have an appetite
I'll be in a good mood
Not hungry
Satisfied
Except maybe for
The Hunger for Love
And Knowledge
That Hunger is constant
Eating my brain
And my heart
 
Ok...
Deep Breath...

© 2009 AMetaphoricalSoul


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Interesting personification, turning hunger into a thing instead of a feeling. Great write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow. Such interesting and intriguing perspective here. It kept me reading. Very flowing and consistent. I found it original and unique. Very nice.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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