Dada

about a special girl..her name is Senada and she likes to be called Dada even though I prefer her real name haha

 

Is it not that warm smile that makes the sun jealous

Is it not that deep soul that oceans envy

Is it not that majestic beauty that Meryl Streep wishes

For all I know she is as hot as the most sizzling volcanic lava

Her body scent does not even measure to the best human made Prada

I roamed the world and had them all but haven’t yet met someone like Senada

Her warm smile might as well heal the sun’s wounds but let that sun learn she likes to be called Dada!

Reviews

[emipoemi]

Apart from the fact that Line 4 sounds like you're referring to Meryl Streep (which by the way, Line 3 should read "....for which Meryl Streep wishes), this is actually a spectacular ode to this angel. That last line really knocked it over the park. In a way, it undermines the first line, in another way it doesn't, but it definitely packed the hardest punch. Well done!

[Leo]

glad you like it and thanks for the constructive criticism..i'll take a look at it

[emipoemi]

my pleasure.

[Insight "MH"]

What a lovely poem you have here, It has a romantic comedy feeling to it. I've enjoyed every part of it, especially the last three.

[Leo]

Thank you Insight for your thoughtful feedback..blessings to you

[Insight "MH"]

You are welcome....peace.

[R Smith]

She sounds wonderful my friend and I'm sure she will fall for this lovely poem to her endless charms, great write Stanger :)

[Leo]

Thank you Beevor..I felt challenged because her ex wrote her a poem so I had wine and wrote her this the following day :)..glad you like!