Alone

 

Alone in a world filled with darkness,

I sit engulfed in the shadows.

Wondering if I can ever be saved,

Looking back on happier days.

What caused this drastic change?

What made my world rearrange?

 

Alone drowning in my sorrows,

Worrying that it was all in vain.

Wondering when it will be tomorrow.

Will it take away this pain?

What happened to my happy life?

What happened to me becoming a wife?

 

Alone dreaming of a new beginning,

Knowing that I am really winning.

My life may not be perfect,

But I am loved and I give my love.

Wondering where this journey will lead,

Will I succeed?

 

Alone pondering where my life will end up,

Looking in my half empty cup.

Searching for the answers I need,

For what I truly want it to be.

Wondering when the loneliness will end,

Will I ever find my soulmate and friend?

Reviews

[Fear Corrupts!]

With your writing skills yes, you will find your soul mate and friend....very well done....
But just remember, your life isnt over...good is still to come...and who is to say that once you die happiness dies as well??? I find that if you just stop looking for what you want some how what you want finds you.

[Mr. Lopez]

I loved your poem , probably because i have built my home on this lonely corner of life. He is out there looking for you and when he finds you these feelings will be but a distant memory. Great work !!

[Debbie_Philly]

A very sad write.... but i can relate and I thinks its important to write what we feel.... very well written ... BRAVO !!!

[The Mad Prophet]

Writen with emotion, and very discript. I like darkness myself. I found and odd confort in my pains, all though I want to free them so I can reach my point of being, or exsistance. That can be a far illusion if you act like me and not talk to those you know. Reach out to people you can trust, test out the water before you dive, all that good stuff. thanks for sharings.