I Love

I Love

A Poem by Kristin

The way you c**k your head in utter confusion
When you hear something you don’t understand
Here let me explain it to you
You’re the farthest from bland

The way your hair sits atop your head
And beckons me
To brush through it
How much more perfect could it be?

The way your skin is so perfectly tanned
And the lights bounce off of it
A little show for me
Not a scar on you, not even a bit

The way your eyes light up
When you smile
The way you wear your clothes 
In your own perfect style

When your perfect lips falter
For just a second
As to show you’re not so perfect
While your face reddens

The way your chest rises up and down
So evenly
As you catch your breath
I know you can’t do everything so easily

The way you twist your hands
When you get shy
Holding a gaze
Waiting for a reply

The way your legs shift
When you get bored
This wont take much longer
Although I have more to say, you have so much to adore

The way you wear your flaws so proudly
For everyone to look at and know
That you arent too perfect
Which makes you better in my eyes though

The way you look at me
At this very moment
I know we may last
In this perfect commitment
STAINEDBLANK

© 2012 Kristin


Author's Note

Kristin
Leave reviews!! I wont be back for a few days and I want to know what you think<3

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You have a really divine love for someone, it seems. Well done poem expressing the happy part of love.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! It's rare to find such a poem about happiness, and this seems to be it. Great imagery! I can really picture said guy, and nice word choices as well. You may want to work on the flow a little, but other than that, amazing!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 15, 2012
Last Updated on December 11, 2012
Tags: love, flaws, perfection, perfect, eyes, confusion, mine

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Kristin

Atlanta, GA



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