Stained Blank

A blank state of mind

My thoughts solely blind

My non existant feelings left behind 

Frozen in place with no where to go 

A numbness that crawls to my finger tips

A coldness that sends shivers through my lips

A success that holds my body in its grip

My life being my only foe

As compelling darkness takes over my body 

Everything I’ve ever known getting foggy

The things I once saw getting spotty

My whole life flashing by as if I’m watching a show

Im gone but I can feel you

Coming as I’m going as if on cue

All we had was once so so true

Oh dear I had loved you so

Your tears I feel them

Remembering what I once was but no longer am

I know you hope this was a scam 

Oh but dear I know

You don’t really care

I was just another spare

My whole life stripped bare

Oh love you’re another pro

 At this game we all play

Some know their way 

Others just puppets in a play

Others just like me who are put below

Oh just bask in your perfection

Your personality killing like an infection

Soon they will see you in this perception

Oh honey for I cant wait for you to join me though

Author's Note

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Reviews

[kublakhan27]

This is pretty cool...it's a unique rhyme scheme and you make it work without sacrificing any of its meaning :)

[Owlgirl]

Great poem! It's amazing how you spin us into a story and the emotion can be felt dripping from the lines! The flow is smooth and you have great word choice. Good job!

[Tai Ryens]

I love this poem, it expresses a feeling quite clearly. Though, the thoughts are all over the place, especially near the end, but it suits the piece well. Well done, you have a lot of potential