Proof

A Poem by Kristin

I want

To live

,Be living proof

That everything

Will be okay.

I want

To die

Silent reminder

That nothing

Was okay.

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Conflicting points that both have a philosophical logic to it, and a definite portrayal of an unstable intellect debating . . . Well done.

An excellent two-sided conflict. Very appropriate for the month of January - as in Janus the two-faced god.

This is very philosophical. Excellent job!

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Added on January 5, 2014
Last Updated on January 5, 2014
Tags: writing, poetry, sad, love, lost, stupid, bones, life, body, personality, pain, death

Accident

By letter

Giving up.

Sleep.

Echo.