2 a.m

2 a.m

A Poem by Kristin

Those words on your lips
That don't mean a thing
They burn a hole
In the air when you
Say them to me
I know I'm hopeless
I know I'm going nowhere
But please stay a little while
I promise I won't be long

© 2013 Kristin


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Kristin
Its a late night write!! Love reviews!

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Ees
Nice!
I know those moments and I know 2 a.m. relatable read. Kinda like, oh well, let me enjoy you while you are here, even if it means jackshit.
Nice job. I like your poetry!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is beautifully vivid. The first three lines are phenomenal!! and I love the ring of truth you bring with the contrast of the words meaning nothing and implying that they say you're hopeless and going no where, and yet you need them to stay with you.


Posted 11 Years Ago


'they burn a hole in the air ...' wow, that's very good imagery right there. It's so vivid too, the actual truth behind this phenomenon of lies. I like the innocence and Kristin, yet another good night time write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


O, if unsaid words rest behind the lisp of a significant other, I'd gladly take the breath of secrecy. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Love the "burning a hole" image...good stuff for a late-night write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


It's all golden but that last line... that's perplex-x-x-x-x-ing ... my head, spinning like a compass, wondering about the nuance of you. Nicely done!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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