Twisted

One lies 

And so does the other

Which one to believe

And which one is trying to deceive

Two lies

Just the same

But which will I let win

Lie to yourself,Lie to others

But try to lie to me

And not a word is believed

One lies 

And so does the other

Why believe either

When neither is true

An answer is needed

So it be wrong

As long as one is there

For me to tell right from wrong

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

I felt a third-person connection with a duo falling in love; judging silently as decisions are made and various aspects of perception are protested amid the two. Unsaid interventions also inhabit your character's mind; a desire to choose which side is real but acknowledging both sides are love all the same. I like this. Well done.

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nice....

[SAGAR]

Beautiful thoughts put up ...

[kublakhan27]

A nice and very definitive statement of defiance and self-worth...well done :)

[KurKota]

A nice crafting of asking oneself the proverbial question when caught between two different stories....which is the truth. A life situation we all confront. You do a nice job of asking how we "process" thougth this. I like the way you use the structure of One Lie, Two Lies, One Lie in the piece....very astute structuring.

[Lina Grey]

lies are twisted complications. interesting write hun