All seeing

The all seeing eye

Who watches all

North to South

East to West

The all seeing eye

Sees you and everyone else

There is not one thing

It doesn't know

The all seeing eye sees so much it would never tell

How broken,

and pathetic

and sorrowing

and horribly you ,you are

To anyone else

The all seeing eye

Who does nothing but stand by

And watch you as you live, and as you die

It sees how much one fights to live

and how much another prays for death

The all seeing eye sees one and all

and all the secrets kept

and not a word was said

because all seeing, is all knowing

and after such broken nights it sees

Not a word, Will be said

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Author's Note

Review!

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

My take on this is the judgmental character resting within all of us; even if we reject and disacknowledge it at all costs. Ever look at someone's shirt, think it unnecessary or unfitting for public use, but never let them know your thoughts?
That, is a clear example of how apathetic we are regarding opinions of other people though we never explicitly tell them.

[SAGAR]

Very beautiful write up ...

[kublakhan27]

Very ominous...the repetition really cranks up the drama...nice work^^

[Lina Grey]

intresting. Reminds me of that old saying, "if walls could talk..." The idea of being watched at all times can be a bt unnerving, at times. I like how it poses an outside view to the strange nature of humans, the contradictory individualism of such an eccentric and overwhelming race. Very nice hun :)