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A Poem by Kristin

One second you're there
The next, you're not
Shooting up like a dare
Spreading far, Then contracting like a dot

Bright lights in the sky
There to guide me straight home
Its been awhile since I've said goodbye
I've gone around trying to roam

Home, home what is that?
A place or a thing? Or maybe a person
Where do you think my home may be at?
With all this in mind I ask you a question

Dear oh dear will you be my home?

© 2012 Kristin


Author's Note

Kristin
Random thought I wrote in a rush but give me ideas!

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I agree with Tai, but overall this is excellent. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hmm, I enjoyed this piece. It could use a bit of cleaning up and organization, but this is a good thought to write on. My only problem would be the last line of the first stanza, that disturbed the flow that you started off with. Good job

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on July 6, 2012
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Tags: home, dare, love, you, romantic, person

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Atlanta, GA



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