Little Girl

You did it to yourself

Theres nothing I can do to help

Little girl you wanted to die

And you leave me asking why

Go ahead, I dont care

You've left no room for repair

Little girl, you did it this time

You've played this out like a mime

No words to say how  you feel 

How about we make a deal

Little girl I'll watch you wither away

Your life is foggy but your death is clear as day

Little girl, Little girl lets play a game

Oh little girl you hold no shame

In this game theres a catch

We'll fight for life in this match

Cause this  life is addictive

You secretly know you want to live

Little girl, you did it this time

Cause now you're gone like the flip of a dime

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Reviews

[Owlgirl]

Wow!! Very well done! I got the impression that the narrator was talking to a past version of herself as a child, very intruiging, and into my library it goes!

[Tai Ryens]

Great job. The last stanza intrigued me, along with various other lines. It has a sense of a parent giving discipline, or perhaps giving up on a suicidal friend. (Maybe the character herself, only you know.)