Waking Dream

Waking Dream

A Poem by StacyPerry
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5-2-2011

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Waking Dream

Yet the time has come for your love to fail me,

No big surprise my darling soul

You've tried as I have to work this skeleton key,

There is a "snap" as it breaks as too many troubles have taken its toll

Know that we can only hold one another within our separate hearts,

Keep each other warm and safe throughout the night

This is how we stay melded yet apart,

Know that we've been to hell and back yet shall not give up the fight

Letting go of different things but keeping some of the others,

Well this requires a tender touch of finesse

As we face the task of knowing our druthers,

Then let it begin with learning we did give it our best.

Copyright May 2, 2011 Stacy Perry

© 2011 StacyPerry


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Sometime we can feel defeated. No-one want to separate but the fear can overtake us. The tone of this poem is sad. When a dream fall apart. Need to find the pieces that made the dream appear. A powerful poem with a sad tale. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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That was poetically so strong and powerful.
"Letting go of different things but keeping some of the others,
Well this requires a tender touch of finesse "
Loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very beautiful


Posted 12 Years Ago


Very nice, Cheers!

Posted 12 Years Ago


First of all, I love the title Walking Dreams it draws many thoughts
and images within the readers mind
The poem is well written. Your message
is very clearly conveyed
Excellent write Hugssss

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You articulate well and prolifically, but I humbly suggest trimming it down or "artsifying" it. Show, don't tell. Instead of describing the person, describe the shadow sort of thing. This piece might benefit from a minimalist kind of spin. Keep writing!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometime we can feel defeated. No-one want to separate but the fear can overtake us. The tone of this poem is sad. When a dream fall apart. Need to find the pieces that made the dream appear. A powerful poem with a sad tale. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good one..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice work on this poem Stacy...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this poem. The first two stanzas I really liked.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So many of us come with excess baggage and often times it takes a love beyond understanding to bypass this.........excellent piece Stacy

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ashtabula, OH



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