Clay Moll

3-24-2011

Clay Moll

Amazing how the times have changed,

Taken, molded and rearranged,

Yet as the clay begins to dry,

There is something missing and I wonder why,

A piece that should of been there first,

Amongst the doll you are cursed,

So I  make sure that as you are dried,

Keep well as hardened hearts denied,

As this is what was missing in formation,

I thought you'd like this information,

Perhaps you can now change your ways,

If I can see this then others may,

Be well my dear porcelain doll,

Just sit on my shelf of the other molls,

A collection of gangsters and of their loves,

Glad I hardened you before you sent me below or worse above.

Copyright 3-24-11 Stacy Perry

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"There is something missing and I wonder why,
A piece that should of been there first, "
A interesting poem. Each line making new doors open in the poem. The vision of being molden.
"Be well my dear porcelain doll,
Just sit on my shelf of the other molls,
A collection of gangsters and of their loves, "
A amazing poem. You made me think this afternoon.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

the ending has a twist that i wasn't expecting. The flow is easy to follow.

[Zackery Alan Daley]

Realistic, to the point, and has a nice beautiful flow with zero syllable hiccups to ruin the pattern of rhyming. GREAT job

[Inci 2]

Nice intense poetry..