Your words are true in the poem. We will remember the first person who open our heart and mind up for real. I like how you made your point in the poem.
"We had been so good together without being a mess,
Now we have parted and we're seemingly loveless,"
A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote
Your words are true in the poem. We will remember the first person who open our heart and mind up for real. I like how you made your point in the poem.
"We had been so good together without being a mess,
Now we have parted and we're seemingly loveless,"
A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote
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