You Never Forget Your First

You Never Forget Your First

A Poem by StacyPerry
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3-22-2011

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You Never Forget Your First

Why must I think about you each day,
The love we shared simply got in the way,
So I take my mind and close it off at the start,
As I take this knife and bury it into my heart,
We had been so good together without being a mess,
Now we have parted and we're seemingly loveless,
I do miss you as you might know,
So just remember that my first one as it is the truth even so.

Copyright 3-22-2011 Stacy Perry

© 2011 StacyPerry


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Your words are true in the poem. We will remember the first person who open our heart and mind up for real. I like how you made your point in the poem.
"We had been so good together without being a mess,
Now we have parted and we're seemingly loveless,"
A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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We never do, so true love! Parting does not always mean it is through negativity and whoever has our heart, remains! Great poem xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice work Stacy...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very true.. the impressions are set and our minds can travel to the past without much effort.. the heart has a great extended memory..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice flow..your poems are always great!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good words..!!!

Keep Sharing..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your words are true in the poem. We will remember the first person who open our heart and mind up for real. I like how you made your point in the poem.
"We had been so good together without being a mess,
Now we have parted and we're seemingly loveless,"
A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ashtabula, OH



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