Adonis

Adonis
Please let me be your superman,
Let me be the one who saves you in the end
I can be the Adonis to you without a second thought,
My shoulders are sore but it matters not

I'm the martyr for every problem and it includes yours,
I am the one who pushes shut the demon filled doors
I shall be strong for you and not let them escape,
I can even darn that nice little cape

You'll never have to worry again,
I shall always take care of you my lover and friend
I am the one that will protect you from the world,
No one shall pass unless they can take my strength and make it unfurled

So know that while I give you my full attention,
I am shall never bother to b***h or mention
That I am falling apart within and without,
The world on my shoulders and I know you shall never doubt

As love from me will hold you together,
Myself, well, I shall dissipate into nothing more than a feather
Which is light as you may know, yet I can not let you down,
So remember this day as I am the one who is being crushed to death saving you as my wrists break, my heart shatters, I protect you and my hands are bound.

Copyright 3-18-2011 Stacy Perry

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Friendship cures all sins and discomforts..!!!

Great Write..!!!!

[StacyPerry]

I posted this on 3 sites, I got the same reaction of how self less and how sweet this poem was.....I actually wrote this out of a sarcastic manner due to me taking the weight of the world on my shoulders because everyone else was too lazy to take care of themselves and I had to take care of them or nothing would get done and no one help them.

Cool how everything is interrupted when you don't explain things.....[this was not sarcastic, lol]

[Akshat♥]

we can do anything to us save our dear ones..
good poem:)

[Nicaushio Yamaki]

Good work

[Coyote Poetry]

True love and friendship gives all with a smile and a kind word. The poem is amazing.
"So know that while I give you my full attention,
I am shall never bother to b***h or mention"
A very strong ending to a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote