Join Me

Join Me
I don't think I have anymore tears left to cry,
There you sit and wonder why
I've left them all upon the pillow,
As you sit underneath the willow
I know in this hellish life there are no guarantees,
So don't try to give them to a saddened pathetic me
Let me take my last breath and leave this life time with a faint whisper of I love you,
THEN you shall know that all of the words I had previously spoke were more than true
I just can't take this anymore yet you think your end is near,
Sorry to burst your endless pity party my dear
Therefore I shall leave you with these words to recall,
There was nothing you could do as others did try so if you're taking that knife to your heart......don't stall.

Copyright 3-12-2011 Stacy Perry

Reviews

[Sherene]

Brilliant emotional awakening.. love the line "Let me take my last breath and leave this life time with a faint whisper of I love you," (sighs)
but the last line was something.. I think I might stall. still left something to achieve.
But, according to this,,, who cares!!
its actually lettin me read more and more.. U have a gift.

[Art]

an emotional release ...

nice work Stacy....

[Akshat♥]

short and sweet poem..
i liked it..join me is nice title to it..
great write..thanks for sharing:)

[ShaneBerry]

very expressive. and straightforward. very good write.

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong words create a wild vision with a bad ending. I like the directness of this poem.
"I know in this hellish life there are no guarantees,
So don't try to give them to a saddened pathetic me"
Powerful words and story made the poem a pleasure to read. Thank you.
Coyote

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Fantastically expressed emotions..!!!!