Not Soon Enough

Not Soon Enough
Love is fleeting,
Ever lasting,
We were meeting,
Always casting,
Shadows stare back at us,
We are intertwined,
There is a kiss that was a must,
Melded together were our minds,
So take these thoughts and hold them near,
Mi Milosc...Mi Minu...My ever loving husband to be I do swear;
Our marriage shall come within these next few years.

3-6-2011 Copyright Stacy Perry

Reviews

[Sherene]

Loved it. I don't know if what am going to say means something or not. But, it seems like you were meant to be together. You must be very lucky unlike me.
The emotion is so powerful that it can drive one crazy.
I don't think ever there would be one for me. Well, you are lucky. So, make it happen!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the movement and hope in your words. I like the language you used.
"Always casting,
Shadows stare back at us, "
A amazing poem. I hope the final line will come true. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[ShaneBerry]

i loved the rhyme scheme! very unique! and your word choice! fabuloso! an amazing write from an amazing writer!
and what does Mi Milosc...Mi Minu mean? is it a name? or a different language?

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Terrific..!!!!