Cross The Line

Cross The Line

As I sit and wish upon a star,

You have come true thus far,

Perhaps if I were to give a prayer,

Then once more you'd be near,

Whichever religion you feel within,

I must admit I hold thoughts without sin,

I am an Agnostic and that is oh k,

You are a Catholic and cool with me anyway,

So let it be known that religions do NOT make the couple because our co-exists,

As lovers and friends because of our hearts entwined kiss.

Copyright 2-24-2011 Stacy Perry

Reviews

[Arctic Fox]

Well I sense that you might be getting some outside crap about your relationship from other people. Don't worry about it. I'm christian dating a wiccan and I do just fine. A poem that rather reminds me of the star crossed lovers though. you are standing on some dangerous ground with certain people. the Catholics can be very closed minded people. well at least some of them. Strong feeling throughout the whole poem. keep it up.

[Coyote Poetry]

Religion shouldn't effect a strong love. Two people with same dreams and goals can do anythings. A beautiful poem with a very good story. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

What a lovely concept... Nicely written!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Like the flow..the concept..!!