Writhe

Writhe

A Poem by StacyPerry
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2-11-2011

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Writhe

Skeletons in my closet,

Monsters under the bed,

You swore they were gone but I bet,

You never thought they would keep lurking in my head,

Creepy things that crawl,

Man they are everywhere,

So take this to heart all,

Perhaps you can even take this as a dare,

Keep your wits about you,

Know where you shall go,

Let others who harm enjoy the days you make them rue,

Plus a kick of making them know they are one of a kind as in LOW.

Copyright 2-11-2011 Stacy Perry

© 2011 StacyPerry


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I LOVE this. The pace is beautiful and it's flows all so well.

Nicely written

Posted 9 Years Ago


Some skeletons come back at will. I like the feel and story in your words. A strong poem with a very good ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

(Question) Are they supposed to be coma's or periods?
This is a long sentence, and each new line is capitalized.
It's a nice plot and strong use of grammar.

~S. D. Blankenship

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I get the gist of it, but i think the wording was a little to simple for the effect i think it can conjure.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the monsters under the bed and they keep lurking in your head. Those are great lines in this poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good one..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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StacyPerry
StacyPerry

Ashtabula, OH



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I have another profile on here I can not get into, so I had to start a new one. Please read ALL of my Poetry and Writings on this page and my old site on here [in which I have a lot of work.....*a tea.. more..

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