Writhe

Writhe

Skeletons in my closet,

Monsters under the bed,

You swore they were gone but I bet,

You never thought they would keep lurking in my head,

Creepy things that crawl,

Man they are everywhere,

So take this to heart all,

Perhaps you can even take this as a dare,

Keep your wits about you,

Know where you shall go,

Let others who harm enjoy the days you make them rue,

Plus a kick of making them know they are one of a kind as in LOW.

Copyright 2-11-2011 Stacy Perry

Reviews

[D S Rollins]

I LOVE this. The pace is beautiful and it's flows all so well.

Nicely written

[Coyote Poetry]

Some skeletons come back at will. I like the feel and story in your words. A strong poem with a very good ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Rev. Fr, S. D. Blankens..]

(Question) Are they supposed to be coma's or periods?
This is a long sentence, and each new line is capitalized.
It's a nice plot and strong use of grammar.

~S. D. Blankenship

[Phillip J Clayton]

I get the gist of it, but i think the wording was a little to simple for the effect i think it can conjure.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the monsters under the bed and they keep lurking in your head. Those are great lines in this poem

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!!