Sanctified Within Your Soul

2-1-2011

If I were sanctified within your soul,
Taken within that grasp of control
Everything you used to and do now know,
Bleed my veins for love so cold

There was a time that I waited on you,
Hand and foot plus in between
Now there is nothing more I can do,
As the icicles of hatred stopped my heart I deem

We had it all at one point you realize,
Then came our too perfect sickened lives
The sex, the hate, the lust, the lies
My blackened heart had received it's demise

If I were sanctified within your soul,
Taken within that grasp of control
Everything you used to and do now know,
Bleed my veins for love so cold

The tale of this life we led together,
All shall end as you walked away
Those words of swearing you'd leave me never,
Were all false things you spit in my face everyday

Know it now you can always tell
Stab wounds in the back
Each mark has been a living hell,
Quickly scar tissue begins to stack

If I were sanctified within your soul,
Taken within that grasp of control
Everything you used to and do now know,
Bleed my veins for love so cold

Make me bleed (a heart has died)
Make me fall (a body given out)
Make me feel (there is nothing left)
Make me go (I claim my souls death)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem with a strong story of love turning cold and dark. No weakness in this poem. Each set of lines adding to a story with a bad ending the only way out. I like the ending. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[D S Rollins]

I really like this. Beautiful.

[Hello, Goodbye]

great imagery..

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

I am speechless..!!!!!!!!

This is a wonderful write..fantastic situation..!!!!!!

SUPERB..!!