Kiss Me, Cut Me

Kiss Me, Cut Me
Lay down your sword at my feet,
Make sure you lay along side it
I'll bend over you until our lips meet,
Grab the steel next to you and not quit
As you grab the back of my head,
I feel the kiss planted firmly
It was a kiss of the living dead,
A zombie you were to me
So as I back off quick with your blade,
I stand and thrust it in a downward motion
Your face never went to another shade,
As your heart and your head were cut deep and off as was my notion.

Copyright 1-25-2011 Stacy Perry

Reviews

[InkSlinger]

Dark.. very dark and angry... I liked it.. I like that you are stretching out of the comfort zone and writing with such emotion.. Well done Stacy!

[Coyote Poetry]

Never leave your weapon near when a woman is angry. I like this poem. A very good poem with a interesting story. I like the ending to this outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Aimee Mahathy]

Wonderful! I loved the darkness of it, the depth of it, and the overall strangeness.
Great job!

[Kelley]

Ok that was strange but I liked it.
Thanks for sharing.
Kelley

[Hello, Goodbye]

love the darkness and the exploratory musing here.. the imagery and narrative is captivating.. I did enjoy this much, left with the feeling of wanting much more.. good stuff here..

[Poetic Beauty]

this is a bit darker than your usually writes. the scenery is sober and it is the kiss of goodbye. Would make for a great short story.

[D S Rollins]

Really really good, powerful and violent imagery.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Fantastic..!!!! S