Later....NOT Goodbye

1-18-2011 [Tara inspired me]

No matter how close or how far,

 I'm just a phone call away or even in the next car,

 Just know even in your deepest lows or you're highest highs,

 You'll never be rid of me....it will never be goodbye.

[Copyright 2011 1-18/Stacy Perry ]

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"later" is a good word. I advice people never leave with anger and bad words as the final goodbye. "Hug and kisses" to allow the memory of a goodbye to be sweet and kind. We never know when we will lose someone forever. I like the complete poem. Great logic in your words.
Coyote

[Ruth]

To have that balance is awesome!
Beautifully voiced love
xx

[Hello, Goodbye]

I think the resolute feeling of commitment is well displayed here.. It is firm in its purpose and clear in its feeling.

[Poetic Beauty]

I like the expression of that you are only a phone call away in this poem. That you are going to be a stable person in this other humans life. Great expression of being a friend/love.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

That is a lovely way of conveying someone your feeling..!! I like the idea..!!!

Good one..!!

Keep sharing..!!

[InkSlinger]

Later Tater.. no goodbyes here.. Enjoyable!

[Zackery Alan Daley]

Stacy, you are just a bad a*s chick. I would be afraid to fight you, and I'm a 245 pound athlete. Your poetry is second to none, though to me tied with the almighty Selene, but she is not human. I'm starting to think neither of you are, or maybe you have Aspergers like me and it makes your literacy skills boost. lol

Oh yeah and this mini-stanza poem was amazing. Amazing enough for a response like that.

[D S Rollins]

Aww! This is sweet. And I guess nowadays when we say 'later' it's another way of saying goodbye, but this emphasizes it definitely isn't!