trUSt

1-14-2011

trUSt

If u only knew what was in my head,

The demons, monsters and walking dead,

Can you tell that they seep into the waking state??

Oh yes my dear and I can not wait,

Want to exercise these demons in a permanent way,

Want to help me with this, can you stay??

Take my hand and stand tall,

You and I together shall build that wall,

No creature could ever pierce this or come between us,

As our love will slay them as well as our trust.

-Copyright 1-14-11 Stacy Perry

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

A Lovely shot down the lane..!!!

Awesome Work..!!!

Liked it very much..!!!

Good Wishes your way..!!

[InkSlinger]

Very nice Stacy, another solid write, enjoyed the rhyming scheme..

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes trust must be earned. When two people fall together with the same goals and dreams. Life will be OK. I like the story and the positive ending to this excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[StacyPerry]

Thank you to "Rollin" for pointing out that little "I" mishap, it is fixed.

[D S Rollins]

I like the emphasis on the 'us' in the title. And just a question, is it meant to be 'You and I together shall build that wall?' I just felt that there was a word missing?
I love this and I love the rhyme scheme.