Ever More

1-13-2011

You beg to differ,
I plead to know
You want this to occur,
I thought that was low
You made me feel small,
I made you hurt inside
You curled my heart in a ball,
I saw a piece of you had died
You were the one who staid,
I was the one who walked
You gave promises that were made,
I was the one who talked
You know I hold you close,
I know you think of me
You know me, well most,
I know we could again never be
You know the moral of this tale,
I have told you this before
You know I am apologizing because I did bail,
I however can't say I am sorry for being happy ever more.

Reviews

[Zackery Alan Daley]

My theory: repitition rarely works in poetry, and is a natural irritant to our minds, but it definatley works in this piece. Again I am astounded at your talents, fluctuation from vague to clarity and easily related problems that may be unique but that is the difference of empathy and apathy.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good write..!!!

[InkSlinger]

I enjoyed the, You and I repetition of this.. contrasting differences, between him and her. It is true, misery loves company.. but when we allow misery to enslave us.. we fall victim to love's bitter taste.. Super job conveying your feelings..

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong story in the poem. Some decisions are hard to make. But they must be made and a lot of pain and misery can be kick up and re-awoken. I like the ending. Last two lines must be the way. Can't live in misery forever. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[D S Rollins]

This reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe's poem 'The Raven' Just because of the 'ever more.' But I like this!