Feelings

1-11-2011

The beauty inside,
I can't deny
How you make me feel,
Things are so very real
With every touch,
I smile so much
Your tender words,
Brings singing of the birds
I can't thank you enough,
As our lives have been rough
Yet when we met,
Down for me you've never let
So hold in your heart as this is true,
You're my love, my wanted one.....Mi Minu.

Reviews

[InkSlinger]

Nice little ditty, enjoyed the rhyming flow.. soft and mellow!!

[Ruth]

This is lovely, to find that connection is simply wonderful xx

[SpokenWord]

Love always has that magical feel to it like it is directly connected to our hearts and our fantasies that seem to come to life. This poem explores that magic in the most loving of ways.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Lovely words for loved ones...Wow...!!!

[StacyPerry]

"Mi Minu" is a very special and love of mine....

[D S Rollins]

Nice. Mi minu.. special someone? :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem of love. I like the flow and the story. A wise person know to celebrate paradise when in reach. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Kelley]

Nice write Stacey