U & Me

1-8-2011

The odds and ends of this life,
Shall never hold back my inner strife
The weary muscles that I feel,
Shall never hold me back from a life so real
The pain that seeps within my bones,
Shall never hold me all alone
The love that you radiate,
Shall never take me from this state
Remember that you are the one,
The loving, caring, non forgotten son
You make me see what I can not,
Amazing things that shall never rot
A beauty of passion is what we hold,
An epic love is what I'm told
So look into my eyes the one you have chose,
Know that our love stands true and bold.

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

The flow of this poem is smooth and easy to follow. This love in this poem comes shining through.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. Last line is what love should be. No-one can get in and to be able to celebrate in each other. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Lovely..!!

[Moflo]

I liked the rhythm and pacing a lot in this one. Even the rhymes were really good. Nice poem.

[D S Rollins]

Beautiful, through everything you stick together. That is so nice.

[Ruth]

Through everything, if we can be together with the one we love, that is a blessing :) Beautiful poem hon
xx

[XxWhatsername86]

Amazing! And yes definitely very inspiring. :)

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

very inspiring:) i love the positivity on love..bec. love is always something true and inspiring...inspiring enough to put passion in all we do..i love how i felt the emotion in this poem..very well expressed idea and emotion...great work!