Ambiguous

12-13-2010

Sadness looms,

Thoughts of doom,

 The queen of sorrow,

She might borrow,

 A heart or two,

To simply undo,

Any wrongs in life,

No more strife,

Being happy,

No more sappy,

She takes your heart,

 From the start,

Oh love of mine,

Let's stay entwined,

Now we're much better,

As you read these letters,

My mate of the soul,

You have made me whole.

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

I am to imagine that now she is whole she has no more reason to take hearts to fill her emptiness. I also think that borrowing the hearts will only create more karma in the future that has to be repaid three fold as well. The ending sounds like a soul mate, finding that one that fills us and completes us. Very nice write.

[Coyote Poetry]

"Let's stay entwined,
Now we're much better"
A very good poem. Your words are true. Better to be two to fight this world. I like the poem and the wisdom in the words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Black Cat Fever]

Very confusing, I'm not sure if she's happy or not. I think she's probably not. It is ambiguous, but human emotions often times are. Great job.