A Trip Through Wonderland

12-01-2010

Seeing through the looking glass is something that is unheard of,
As I take the time to really view the hole that Alice fell down
I never thought for one second that "she" would be me as mentioned above,
I have tripped through this life enough my darlings and would like to not wear a frown
Since the tumble and the twirl of the rabbit hole has caught me by mistake,
I knew that I would be able to see the real me within time
If there were larger things that could be made smaller with a simple bite of cake,
Yet as you know this life can flip on a dime
Oh mad hatter of this world would you get out of my head??
Wandering through the fields of which the queen of hearts will kill
Take me to the tea party and make sure I don't end up dead,
This entire trip through the mushrooms has given me a thrill
May I say that my name is not Alice but it is close,
Let me tell you how this tale is similar to mine
Let me sit within my living room and take another dose,
The looking glass and rabbit are all a waste of time
I'm gliding through the lights and I am hearing all I look at,
There isn't a taste that can't be felt by me
"I am impressed" said the mouse which runs on the wheel in my mind which is chased by the Cheshire cat,
This is truly a trip from hell with a kick of visuals from heaven so come join the party.

Reviews

[Daisy123]

My favorite movie...ever. I like this a lot. great work.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love how you compared yourself to Alice In Wonderland. Sometimes life can feel like this. You have given a clear understanding of what life can be like at different times in our lives.

[Coyote Poetry]

The story lost in wonderland had a good ending. A lot more work and effort to insure life is Ok in real life. I like how you set-up the poem. I like the ending. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Hello, Goodbye]

A very curiously interesting addition here..