Prevent

11-15-2010

Never knowing why we do things,
Can't control our minds
Never knowing what life may bring,
This is why there are signs
If we ponder a little more,
Perhaps we can find what we seek
As we continue searching for,
Things that make us strong as well as weak
So in the end of this journey we've started,
There might just be some hope
The amazing strength of the broken hearted,
Shall keep our souls from being broke.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very interesting poem. A broken heart will test us. Leave us broke and we must get up and go forward again. Heart and soul can confuse the mind. We will become stronger from learning sadness and disappointments. A excellent poem. You made me think again.
Coyote

[Black Cat Fever]

A broken heart can be a killer.

[Zackery Alan Daley]

A little too simple for me, but I will never deny when I enjoy a piece of literature and this one seems to just have like this hidden hook that makes me want to read it a few more times. Good write, keep working girl!

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Enjoyed reading of your work this morning..I am glad that I chose this one to read..Sunflower

[Poetic Beauty]

The flow and the rhyme of this poem are well done. We don't always have the answers we are looking for but there is a journey in trying to find them. Great poem. I love the line "The amazing strength of the broken hearted"

[just is]

yes inded this is a interesting write. I enjoyed reading this. I agree with what Coyote said.