Even Keel

Even Keel
Knowing not how you feel,
Your heart is as thick as steel
Seeing that I can slip into it as an eel,
As the layers of your hardened hear I peel,
You look to me as I kneel
A prayer up above is what I steal,
This love with you is beyond real.

Copyright 11-9-2010 Stacy Perry

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

the flow is done well and I love the words you have picked for this poem. I love the line "your heart is as thick as steel." and "Seeing that I can slip into it as an eel" One suggestion. You have heart written twice. You may want to take one of them out. It reads well either way.

[Kelley]

I love it Stacy! Kind of a sensual thing going on but could be taken in all kinds of ways.

Great poem thanks for sharing

Kelley

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the words "Even Keel"'. A short poem. But you said it all. Complete poem was strong. A perfect ending to a excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Black Cat Fever]

Nice the way you kept the rhyme scheme all the way through, nice little poem too.

[Inci 2]

nice i really like such poems with a rhyming flow in it..

[Fran Marie]

a well thought out piece.... deeply expressed and nicely penned