Two Parted & Together

11-6-2010 [This poem is a short one, then I added onto it....hence the title of it]

Two Parted & Together
Something in your eyes is calling,
Deeper within love I'm falling
Touching you to know I'm home,
Feeling your love within my bones
Knowing that you'll stay with me,
The never ending love of 'WE'.

Amazing that it's finally found,
35 years of being knocked down
You helped me up and dusted me off,
The lips you kiss me with are so soft
We're each others strength at times,
We're not amongst the love that's blind.

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

A very positive, romantic and hopeful poem, a poem that brings hope to others who aren't in such a happy place at the moment.

[Tate Morgan]

you have such a longing for love in you

[Art Sun]

a nice thought within your poem...

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Wonderful poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong poem of love and thankfulness. I like the description and the strong ending. Sometime takes a long time before we find the person who will make us happy forever. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

very sweet and touching love story inside this poem:) the emotions was well put together and organize in a sweet manner:)