No Truer Words

10-30-2010 [I've been writing on the road, but this is from today]

Amazing days and breath taking nights,
Looking towards you my heart takes flight
Soaring high as the moon and even the clouds,
A deep sigh of relief as you make me proud
I see heaven and hell both rapped in your eyes,
My sainted sinner where my heart doth lie
You've saved me from an eternity of existing,
Now my life is actually worth enjoying and living
Thank you to thee for showing me how,
To love and to be loved for each moment of now
You'll always remember these words that I stated;
"Loving you is like breathing: It's automatic and done without thinking". I know now we are both sated.

Copyright Stacy Perry 10-30-2010

Reviews

[KatiePie]

"I see heaven and hell both rapped in your eyes,
My sainted sinner where my heart doth lie"
and
"Loving you is like breathing: It's automatic and done without thinking".

were my favorite lines.
this whole piece was deep and eyes opening I love it. I haven't read a love poem that made me smile the way this one did in what has been to long. Honestly, great work. This moved me.
-Cathrine

[JENY]

Wow..
No doubt that the saying.
“a good poet will be a good philosopher” is very true…
Excellent….

[Black Cat Fever]

It's nice when life starts to flow again after a long cold hard spell.

[ShaneBerry]

very nice work, loved it

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Gorgeous!

[Art Sun]

nice work...expressing your own thoughts out to the world is where one finds the most underlying realizations of ones true feelings...

nice...

[StacyPerry]

**This is a true experience. I had been going through the motions of existing......then Jude came along and I began to Live. I never knew there was a difference, I never knew that I could feel my heart in tune with someone else's and I never knew that Love is actually something that you feel within yourself, for yourself as well as for another. It took a Catholic "Patron Saint Of Lost Causes" to open my eyes and make me realize I could love myself and give love to him.....equaling HAPPY.** [I mean no disrespect to anyone I had a prior relationship with as the two past men were wonderful in their own rights, but I am blessed to have gotten it right this time.....oddly enough, thank you Facebook and John, without the company and without that site, we would of never met when I look back].

[Kelley]

Great poem Stacy and I'm glad you have
someone to love you.

Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Robyn]

nice

[Hello, Goodbye]

I love the candor in your expression..