Kind Rhyme

9-9-10

Within this time,
I can find the rhyme
To inform you of how you're mine,
Therefore this next line
Is on my own dime,
Of how I will love you for all time
Due to all of the signs.

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

Nice rhyme all the way through, well done. Like the emotion in your poem too.

[.]

nice monorhyme..

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. I wish I could rhyme with words. A poem that said so much in so few words. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Sean M. Addams]

very cute and catchy piece ... i like this alot simple but kind of deep .. nice job on this!!!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

I really like the brevity of this~ it gives the emotion a deep push of power through the reader's mind~ very well related!~