"zzzzz"

9-2-10

It's coming quick as weeks become days,
Oceans throw wakes into smaller waves
Imagining you within my arms,
We both know that it could do no harm
Just a thought of us becoming whole again,
This makes me feel happy and zen
Therefore as you are lying next to me,
I grab your arm and pull you closer as we both make sounds of "zzzzzz".

Reviews

[Aimee Mahathy]

I really like this one as well! My favourite line was "Oceans throw wakes into smaller waves" the echoing rhyme and certain rhythmic effects of it was remarkable.
Great job!

[Poetic Beauty]

this is relaxing and lets us see a private quiet moment of two people who love each other together.

[Black Cat Fever]

A nice positive poem. There is always hope for happiness.

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad for you. In my fifteen years in the Army. The hello's overtook the sadness of the goodbyes. I wish you well and great times. A very positive poem.
Coyote