Card Game

A Poem by StacyPerry

9-1-10

The love that you hold for me is immense,
There is no more sitting on the fence
I have made a decision that was more than hard,
Leaving behind the last folded card
So as I walk away from the table of the past,
I know that this new card game shall be permanent winnings that will last.

© 2010 StacyPerry

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Aimee Mahathy

I've heard of life being compared to cards before, but never really in this light. It's very original and I love the execution of this poem! The image of "leaving behind the last folded card" was the one that really stuck with me.
Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Black Cat Fever

One life game ends, another whole new one opens up, its good to be on the lookout for it.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

I like the use of a card games and love. In cards we will lose more then we will win. But the victories are always more sweet then the losses. A very good poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..

fantastic analogy~ confidence permeates this powerful poetic~ well done!~

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on September 1, 2010
Last Updated on September 1, 2010

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StacyPerry

Ashtabula, OH

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I have another profile on here I can not get into, so I had to start a new one. Please read ALL of my Poetry and Writings on this page and my old site on here [in which I have a lot of work.....*a tea.. more..