My Minu

8-28-10

The words that flow through my heart,
They are ones of the truest form
I can't believe I just found out from the start,
That it might be half life, yet we are meant to be the norm
If we are together then things will run smooth as silk,
The love held between you and me
The passion is flowing as if we are pouring a glass of milk,
Flowing beyond the point of being free
So as the days near and our imaginations become the reality of what we sought,
Remember this one thing my dear
If you were the sun and I was the moon....somehow each other we have eclipsed without a thought,
Eternity shall be a hell of a lot more clear.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. The emotion when two people become one. They fall together create a better road when two are together. I like the power and strength of this poem.
"The passion is flowing as if we are pouring a glass of milk,
Flowing beyond the point of being free"
A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Black Cat Fever]

This sounds like two people trying to find themselves with a relationship.

[Poetic Beauty]

This poem speaks of confusion but with strong love. You will figure it out in time. Some of the best things are the adventure that is getting to the destination.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

very effective and poignant relatable poem~