Pre Meditation

8-22-10

It was fun last night,
We fooled around
It felt so right,
I was gagged and bound
You caressed me,
I enjoyed your touch
Your handcuffs had no keys,
I didn't care so much
I never tried to get loose,
You made sure I was secured
No safety word or truce,
Every sick fantasy of mine was cured
You would toss and turn me,
Every way that we both pleased
Even when you slammed me on my knees,
You were very appeased
You took out the gag,
Yet I was still bound
You replaced it with a rag,
Soaked in something which made me astound
I opened my eyes,
The night was pure burning day
The house was on fire,
I couldn't get away
A game you lured me into,
One of pure desire
Ended in a little known cu,
As well as my funeral pyre.

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Wow this starts out as one type of poem then boom there is a twist at the end that smacks you in the face. This is creatively done. The first part of this poem is quite steamy and then as you read on you the tone changes slightly and at the end you smacked with reality.

[Black Cat Fever]

Great write! I really enjoyed this.

[Tate Morgan]

lol WELL hAVING FUN i SEE

[Coyote Poetry]

A wild and crazy story. The poem begin with the fulfillment then you took me to the ending of cu and pyre. A powerful poem. You got my attention.
Coyote

so ... this person got you hot?

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oh gosh, didn't see that coming...wow..should have picked it up from the title..clever ending..

[Robyn]

definately left me wanting more, i read thru this piece very fast

[Cynthia]

!!That's great!!
It's full of emotion, which is pretty great!!!