GET OUT

8-17-10

You treat me like s**t,
I take it with a smile
I enjoy every hit,
Inside of me is the burning of bile
Your venom is sweet,
I enjoy every bit
So glad it's me you verbally beat,
I live in denial
Sick of it all,
Intentional or not
Can't take the fall,
My heart sits there and will rot
You have killed off my hope,
You mangled my dreams
You took my way to cope,
You're the last one I should be with so it seems
Then you apologize,
A false tale I've heard before
It's me who pays to buy,
The lies as you spit them before I close the door.

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

I feel this one right to the marrow~


You have killed off my hope,
You mangled my dreams
You took my way to cope,

that's what the they do and they do it so damn well you don't know which side is up by the time you start coming back to your senses~

my own personal senses were knocked back into me (this was the last mistake I would ever make with a male and it was years ago) when my daughter came home one day after learning about the degrees of domestic abuse in health class and said

"he is emotionally and mentally abusing you"
we left the next day~

[Tate Morgan]

A cry from the soul to regain control

[JENY]

Lines revealing resentment…
Very powerful…
Liked the way of your writing….
But fuming ....
will never bring forth any solution...
we must decide what should be done..

[Black Cat Fever]

Time to get away from someone like this but I know its often one of the most hardest things to do. The games these people play is deadly.

[Cynthia]

That's great!
Love this very much!!!!!!
^0^

[Leanne Conway]

I like this poem, Nicely done my friend.

[Fran Marie]

Then you apologize,
A false tale I've heard before
It's me who pays to buy,
The lies as you spit them before I close the door

Lies and deception destroys any form of trust in love relatioships to be sure
deeply expressed and well penned

[Coyote Poetry]

In the end lies twist-up all the good we can see. Your poem was powerful and told a real story. Even the blind will see the truth one day. I like the ending. a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote