Stream Of Consciousness

8-13-10

The moon is full, oh can't you see,
Time takes it toll with every part of me
I'm lost for words, oh yeah, that's great,
At least your speaking let's me contemplate
If thoughts were explosives I would be gone,
You aren't sounding the final gong
A ramble and writing is plain to read,
I seem to write what I think, oh Stream Of Consciousness indeed.

Reviews

[JENY]

Nice piece of thought…
But after reading it..
I feel a sense of incompleteness…
I don’t know…
But liked the theme very much…
The stream of consciousness…

[Black Cat Fever]

thus is born great writings...keep the stream of consciousness going!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Robyn]

i totally agree with selene!

awesome

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

out of the stream comes the purest of poetic forms~ raw and beautiful with a thousand different possibilities kissing every line~ wondrous~ =)~