You [Don't] Love Me

8-12-10......Hell Yeah

If you can take the time to see,
Perhaps you already know
I could use for you to once more save me,
Another day my heart is on the go
There have been times when I've cried,
A stream of tears flow free
So if inside of your heart I'm alive,
Then please make sure you NEVER let me be
If you recall our past talks,
Times of smiles and tears
We dared to take a lovers walk,
Now there are TOO many fears
As simply as this poem began,
I wish that you and I were still; WE
Yet as you see me as an unchanged woman,
The one who loves you and can't accept that you couldn't love me
Even though my love seems to be one sided,
The sad thing is you aren't capable unfortunately
I'll just have to remember YOUR rules and how I must abide,
As I shall stay deluded about our love for all eternity.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem story was very strong and complete. I like the feel of the good memories and time spend together. Each line adding to the powerful ending..
"As I shall stay deluded about our love for all eternity."
A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Black Cat Fever]

The pain of a relationship that wasn't meant to be. A one sided relationship will never work, only results in a lot of hurt. This poem is very sad yet beautiful in its expressed hurt, pain and disappointment.

[JENY]

liked the lines very much…
Very sincere is your expressions..
Love is a discipline….
These ups and downs are part of the discipline….
A nice poem..

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a sad loves lament..strong words and well rhymed

[Taylor H.]

I liked it. The message was strong. I did think you're flow and rhythm was off a bit and I didn't really like the emphasized words. Other than that, this was a really good poem

[Poetic Beauty]

It is hard to see the real world sometimes. Often we long for a situation to change and it doesn't. I am still waiting myself. Three years. Long story too. The poems emotion are a mixture of longing, wanting a change, and hurt. You express all of those quite well in this poem.

[Ashley June Canfield]

Very Good :]

[StacyPerry]

Thank you, Coyote. You figured out the meaning prior to anything, I would bet.
Everything I write is for a reason and inspired by someone or an event that is or did occur. I have a purpose for everything ranging from every tattoo on my body to the poetry and stories I write. "Sometimes all you have to do is look at the surface to see the deeper meaning"........(a quote written by me].