Time

So many days that go bye,
I end up missing you and I cry
I seem to feel so much colder,
Everyday that you get older
Then the day comes that you leave,
I can hold to hope and believe
Maybe you will come back to me,
A life of denial is all I have left, can't you see??

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with you. Time make us softer and willing to have dreams of rebirth. I like the feel of this poem. It is gentle. Like questions and desires that will pop into our head. A very good poem. Short and a complete poem.
Coyote

[Black Cat Fever]

Rather sad but there is a glimmer of hope. Maybe this person will return, at least I do hope so.

[Fran Marie]

A lot of deep emotion within this brief piece~ nicely expressed

[Ruth]

Thats the case when we are in denial, we always see life through those rose tinted glasses:( Great poem hon
xx

[Inci]

Beautiful composition ... nice write i feel

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Nice. Thoughtful poem. The sad poem adds to the beauty of it.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

very sad~ a heartfelt write~

[Bubo]

A broken heart sometimes never heals........your poem could be of a love, or of an older figure in your life, but so sad with a sense of loss.
Bye-by