Morning Time

The sound of water running,

The sound of your voice humming

The sound of the steps you take,

The sound of the breakfast you make

The sound of you chewing,

The sound of the dishes you are doing

The sound of you heading towards me,

The sound of you kissing my head and telling me that you can see

You see me sitting at the table and telling you

Thank you and and I Love You too.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nothing like the smell of bacon and coffee. Someone with a smile and a hello. That is a good start to a day. The poem is excellent. A very good ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Black Cat Fever]

A very domestic yet tender and romantic love scene.

[Ruth]

Best time to tell the one you love all the things you wish them to hear!
Beautiful!
xx

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great insight to how you typical day is and it is very important to tell that person that you love them for you may never get that chance. great flow to this poem.

[M. Elizabeth.]

a nice calm write :)

[Robyn]

cute!
i like it

[Carolina Kel]

Short and very sweet. A wonderful write!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

well used repetition to imbue the poetic with rhythm that draws you along into the sweetest of moments~

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ahh for a morning like that! I am afraid it's not as calm in my house! But lovely idea..well done