"Maybe"

When it comes to you and me,
There is never a time that we will be
Lovers and friends ultimately,
Due to our ups and downs sadly
Therefore if ever asked if there was a "We",
The answer shall remain MAYBE
Due to us ultimately,
Holding onto confusion, can't you see??

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I like this relationship piece, it utters the confusion of complicated emotions and thought which so often accompany human interaction. If indeed we are a we, can there still be a you or a me? Can we lose our identity to love or is it love that defines us and makes us whole? Interesting and thought provoking piece!

[Black Cat Fever]

Relationships are always confusing. Sometimes they stay that way, sometimes they get easier but they are always work and never really completely understanding the other person.

[Ruth]

The process of realisation in the relationship is always harsh! Can "we" survive all that the storm brings? Great poem
xx

[Robyn]

ah the confusion of love.
i enjoyed reading this piece very much

[Inci]

beautiful poem..:))

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

rapport drawn and redrawn in good poetic form~ another well written connective piece re human relations between the genders~

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the use of maybe in this poem. Sometimes in life with our relationships it feels like a maybe. great flow to this poem. Nicely done.

[.]

short and not so sweet, a little forlorn...touches the emotion of an unsure lover...well done

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime it hard for two to gather as one. We allow too many things to interrupt our life to allow the peace two people need. I like the feel and the last line of this poem. Last line told the truth. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[.]

i love the rhyme scheme-awesome-
and lovers going though ups and downs
is so relate able...
MAYBE seems to arise without the we...

a magnificent poem!!!