We Might

I wondered why you held me tight,
I couldn't understand why I felt as high as a kite
I ended up floating so high that the sun took my sight,
I now know why they say "love is blind", do you understand why I don't want to fight??
I some times may scream, kick and bite,
I just want your love tonight
So let's put away all of our plight,
Let this be the one time that neither of us are wrong or right
We can agree to disagree as we turn out the light.

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

Yes, I agree. Don't ever go to bed angry at each other or leave the house angry at each other. Better to sleep with positive feelings and when you leave the house saying I love you and not being angry is the best way for that person may not come home and not because they chose not to but because they couldn't.

[Taylor H.]

I liked the idea of this poem. I didn't like the flow or the fact that every single line rhymed. But that's just my opinion. I felt like the rhymes were trying to hard. Let it flow more.

[Inci]

nice :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Last line told the story. Sometime all we have left is desire of the flesh that get stronger and more desperate with each day. A powerful poem. I like the story and the ending was outstanding.
Coyote

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

never go to bed angry~ I like your poetic take on it~ well done~

[Ruth]

To put problems aside isn't easy but we have to at times, good poem
xx

[NSisifo]

It's called angry sex and it's pretty great. {:

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great way of expressing you emotions and the feelings come through loud and clear. The description is good as well but the flow isn't there however I do like the poem for its words.

[Awdures]

Isn't it true that we always think that there is an ulterior motive to someone's kindness? Sometimes it its good just to accept and move on, accept a hug for what it really is. Intelligent and thought provoking write Stacy. Liked the rhyme scheme, but sometimes the use of one type of rhyme can become stifling. You do is justice here.

Thanks for sharing

[TTBoy28]

StacyPerry - what a great start to a great write! I do think that, "...So let's put away all of our plight..." could be whittled down a bit. I do think it is wonderful what you have done with this though! Good job!