Love Your Lies

If you stand there and hear me cry,
Will you walk up to me to comfort or will it be another lie
You wished for me to be gone and now you care,
What the hell did that accomplish except confusing me even more my dear??
Maybe our relationship is over and I just can't accept it,
Perhaps watching me as I squirm when your words with venom they hit
There is no middle ground with you as it's either black or white,
Every time things go good then it turns into a fight
Let's face it, we love one another more then either can admit,
Too bad we argue then make up then argue yet again, NOW it's my turn so SIT
I'm telling YOU how this is and now you will listen up,
I love you and even if this lovely 3 word statement cuts
Tough times come upon us and I am sick of you wavering as every other word from you is "I love you" and then "goodbye",
Let's face it after all of these years I am starting to love the way you lie.

Reviews

[KatiePie]

The was this ended,
'Let's face it after all these years I am starting to love the way you lie'
That was... BRILLIANT!!
Even though I've never been in this type of situation, some part feels personally attached to this, and I can still feel your emotions and get at what your trying to say, which just means that you most certainly know how to write!
Great write!
-Cathrine

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime lies can give us peace for a moment. But sooner or later the lies overcome the good we can see. A powerful poem. Words don't mean much when we only twist them into lies. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Black Cat Fever]

Sounds like a very painful relationship to be in and its rather chilling when in the end the person is staring to love the pain, somehow that has become love. You do write very well and I like this poem here you've created.

[Dream Weaver]

Wonderful write on such a familiar and yet sad subject.
You've penned this extremely well. I enjoyed it and felt
it..

[Awdures]

You're on fire lady. All the anger I get from this poem is burning my face! It's so good to get it out though. Thoroughly enjoyed the sometimes raw lines you had here and the ultimate finale!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This is a great ranting sort of write. I've never been good at reviewing relationship pieces because I don't quite know what to say. This was well written though and the bite of the sarcasm comes through crisp and clean. Well done.

[Ruth]

Never a great situation
You have portrayed your succumbing really well!
Wonderful!
xx