Never Fade

Never Fade
In times of need I was always there,
You took advantage, but I never cared
Unconditionally I gave all of my love to you,
You loved me back when you decided too
Sad part is; You are the one that I can not shake,
The darkest burning star and you still make me quake
One day you'll look back and see that without me you were alone,
I gather one day I'll look back and see that without you I had no home
Too late is too late and we both know that my perfect disease,
No matter what we both do or say our love shall never fade and that is the key.
Copyright 6-26-10 Stacy Perry

Reviews

[KatiePie]

"The darkest burning star and you still make me quake" was my favorite line in this, the ending really made me smile, like one of those warm hearted smiles that adults love and children think are creepy. In other words, it was beautiful ^-^
I loved it :)
-Cathrine

[Coyote Poetry]

In our heart love scars will always be. But the lessons are for us to be more wise and careful. With age I look back and I'm very thankful for the woman who share time with me. A very good poem. I like the ending.
Coyote

[Ruth]

Unconditional respect is awesome!
Really lovely piece again love!
xx

[Black Cat Fever]

A beautiful and rather tragic love poem. I'm left with the feeling this relationship doesn't last, not because the couple don't want it to, but for some other reason. Nicely done.

[Awdures]

Tinged with sadness, an excellent piece of the end of a relationship poetry. The only change I'd make is to change the too at the end of the fourth line to "to" unless you meant it that way?

Loved it Stacy

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

A truly beautiful poem indeed. I liked it.