Uncondtional Love

The way we live is not a lie,
At times we forgive and at times we defy
There are no rules to this life time,
We grasp at straws and then draw some lines
The time we have is precious to most,
Then there are those that seem to care less or so they boast
It seems to me that we all should be thankful for what we have,
Some others out there take for granted the happy and the sad
It comes with the responsibility of being a human being,
Loving, hating, caring, sating, making sure that we live out our dreams
So when you think life has you down,
A smile won't even hold as it turns to a frown
Just know that through this life and through each and every other,
I shall love you no matter if you are my daughter, son, sister, father, mother or Brother.

Reviews

[Awdures]

A simple and touching poem, with a simple yet admirable message. I think I needed to hear this today when things have been a bit tough! For that I am very grateful to you for sharing your words with me!

Sometimes it's difficult to write about life and be honest and succinct about it. One tends to rave in poetry about injustice. This was beautifully written, well structured, and honest. Send more my way ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong poem. I like the logic in your words. We may not always get along. But we must still be family and friends. A excellent poem my Poet Friend.
Coyote

[Art Sun]

nice work on this view into the reality of family and relationships...love is unconditional

[Black Cat Fever]

This is very caring and tender with a wonderful message. You did a great job on this one.

[Ruth]

There is so much time spent hating with hatred that we do not understand!
This is beautifully written hon, wonderful work
xx

[KatiePie]

This really made me smile :)
I enjoyed this from the botttom of my heart because it's bare honesty, and it's simple and touching.
Gorgeous piece ^-^
-Cathrine

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

A beautifully written poem. I liked the end a lot. Great!

[zombiikillah666]

really good!
and so sweet. (:
i liked this. xD