Forever Together

This was thought of while listening to a song......I do have poems that have a song behind them........you never can tell.

You're trapped in my mind,
A solid sign of a simple obsession
When we have sex is it violent or a sign that you're my possession,
I can't stand the way you look at me,
The way you stare a hole into my soul
So I take you to your knees,
Just long enough for you to feel the cold
Then you push back and try to scare me to death,
I fight you back but you will no longer forget
The love I have for you is as dangerous as it's true,
You'll never find anyone else that loves you this much, I would bet
Stripped down to my naked core,
I am the one that stands in front of you before
Before I move in and place myself on your lap,
So stare at me now and make sure you take a long look lest you forget
I am the one who made you love me and you fell for the trap I set,
I will always love you no matter what
I shall always love you no matter how deep you try to cut,
As the blood flows from my heart that you have torn into pieces and laid on the floor
I've asked for your soul and now I'll just take your heart as well to even the score,
Still looking into my eyes as I stare into yours
There is no escape from me can't you see it's you I adore,
We shall both end up together
I look at you and I seem to need more,
I'll take your life as you take mine and then we shall die I'll have you forever.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Wow. A rage in this poem. In the end may be no winners. A powerful poem. The description and story was very strong. So many lines stood out. I like the feel and emotion of this poem. A outstanding read this morning. Thank you.
Coyote

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This was beautiful and very well penned, I liked the simplicity of this piece a lot.
Great work here :)

[Wicahpi]

Quite the possession poem that you
seem to have the knack for!

"As the blood flows from my heart that you have
torn into pieced and laid on the floor..."

"....now I'll just take your heart, as well, to even the score"

Love that line.

[Ruth]

This is actually quite claustrophobically haunting in a way hon!
xx