Till The End

Do you remember when we held hands,
Can you see past the hate you have for me??
Do you remember when you would understand,
Can you see past the love you attest to blindly??
Would you care if I fell off the edge of your world,
Would you stare blankly as you looked for me??
Would you care if your life then became unfurled,
Would you ever come back to your sense of reality??
I can see you across the empty room,
You are staring at me with the love that you claim does not exist to this day,
You're smile lights the path and I can only assume,
You shall always hate to love me through this haze
So make sure you hug me one last time,
Hold me tight and remember your speech
Remember that we both love one another and together we will bind,
Every emotion that we've ever had as love seems to be the one to teach
The lesson being that no matter how far,
You and I will be together threw thick and thin
It's as simple as getting into a car,
Then I take the drive and we're together again
As I walk in the door and you turn to look,
The smile I have for you is unmistakable
At that moment it is your heart I took,
We shall be friends to the end and it is both of our calls.

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

Would you care if I fell off the edge of your world,
Would you stare blankly as you looked for me??
Would you care if your life then became unfurled,
Would you ever come back to your sense of reality??


You really serach for what your love is giving to the relationship,

indeed, makes you wonder if he even cares , perhap making

long stem promises he cannot keep, sending mixed signals and

all, a well crafted poem of your emotions within~ keep up the good work!

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Wow! This is good. 'the smile i have for you is unmistakable' was great!

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. It takes a lot to create a relationship. Many experiences it takes to make two people connect forever. I like the feel and emotion in your words. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Ruth]

Takes two to dance! lol
Beautiful piece
xx

[zombiikillah666]

wow. i like this alot (:

[NSisifo]

'you're' in the 12th line should just be 'your'
7th to last line, 'threw' should be 'through'

"We shall be friends to the end and it is both of our calls."
But that doesn't mean you have to be happy with it.
Nice.

[KatiePie]

Wow.. just.. wow... this is dripping with passion, pain, hurt, emotion in general. It's beautiful and wonderous at the same time. I love it.
Amazing write! Keep writing!
-Cathrine

[Wicahpi]

"you shall always hate to love me through this haze" is my favorite line.
and it surely takes two...

good job