Teardrop

I have thoughts running through my mind,
As the teardrops fall from time to time
These thoughts are ones that pull the strings of my heart,
As knowing that we have no choice but to part
It shall hurt for a while within my soul,
No matter what occurred in the past in the present you have no control
I shall hold that as the one thing that was good to come out of this,
No matter what the time of day I can't help but miss
The way you would look at me and smile,
You said that you loved me and then after a while
It wasn't enough to speak the words to me my dear,
As you are beginning to prove over and over again that you do not care
So if you are out there waiting for one last statement from me,
I can only say I shall always love you and I know you are too blind to see.

Copyright 2010 -5/13/2010 - Stacy Perry

Reviews

[Rodrick Franklin McLare..]

Stacey... this is Prose. & very straight forward, Love. Nice :)

A letter and a fine sentiment, of true feelings.
Expressed again, to a directive.
A lover...
Which is beautiful, I'm still reading through read requests, and in this.
I do feel again for your feelings... and, hopeful.

Seldom, do I put forward criticism, and I don't wish you. To take this, as such!
I'm a poet as you know and deal in lots of striving for images. Relationships! To style...
My Artistic Impressions challenged, daily. And, painful, hard &... loved!
I appreciate, your style... yet, please. Try something, for me. As a lot of what I read, is to a second party. Love that you hold, or the pain of held.
For some one?

I would that you write, to the reader [me] or, whom ever. Visit you!
It gives us, a warmth of getting to know your heart felt, and precious soul.
A personal relationship, with your heart. :)
Such as you, hold. For your Lovers. In this, I plead...

Spread, your Artistic Wings Angel... describe, for us. LOVE.
Post me, if this feel right? And, please. Push the clouds. With your, pen!

Your Friend ...Ro... Very good Prose. A delight, truly!. Romon in Review.
Write on / Right on ;)

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Oh! This was painful and very heartfelt. I loved the way you ended this piece, it kind of left an impression on reader's mind.
Great work here.

[Libby McKeown]

The words are there, but unfortunately I don't think the art is. This work is one big cliche. It needs imagery, metaphor, some element of mystery and elegance. This reads like a direct rant. What you see is what you get.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime love come to us at the wrong time. We need luck and timing to fall into the right moment to create love and emotion. In my lifetime. Woman seem to be pissed off who I desire. But in the end I met my poor wife of almost 20 years. I like the ending. Hard to brake down some walls. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Art Sun]

nice work on this poem...

[Daisy123]

very deep,i liked it!

[NSisifo]

I like that you can say so much with one teardrop. Nice.

[GhostWoman]

I really like it.

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Very powerful, brought back the feelings I felt not so long ago. Very emotional, well done:)

[Ruth]

Sometimes people never see! Awesome! xx